Tuesday, 24 April 2018

Inverted pyramid/news writing notes and what we have been working on






Hello ELC,

Last day you submitted your first effort at writing the opening paragraph of a news article using The inverted paragraph format. Below are notes to remember when writing for media or for online in this format.

    Remember in a news article:

your audience does not know you, the writer, nor do they know the individuals or groups in your story. So we must, as writers, introduce all the ‘players’ in the story. 

You leave the writer OUT of the story. So we write using third person perspective. 

 Don’t speak directly to the reader in second person. NO ‘YOU NEED TO’.

Give all the info. that fits W5 

Remember to capitalize : Headline each first letter, Proper names (even of companies and days of the week), Start of a sentence.

Today you completed a review/summary of a current event. This is a quiz weight assignment.

Thanks all.
Ms. S

Sunday, 1 April 2018

Film fest. presentation lists. SEE ORANGE FOR UPDATES

Hello All,

I hope this has been a restorative break for you. Some of you submitted your film clips via email in class, still others did so over the holiday. If you are in block F, and have not yet submitted your clip is now past due. Please send it along asap.  Block A, you will submit your clips first block Tuesday morning.  Below is posted F Block's presentation order. A block will sign up Tuesday morning April 3rd. SEE BELOW.

PLEASE SCROLL DOWN FOR DATES/EXPECTATIONS. Thanks, Ms. S


Film Fest Presentation order F block
Friday, April 6:
Film Festival/ 8 presentations (5 mins each) 
1.Cathy Feng
2.Sally Tang
3. Fiona Lu
4.Jenny Ma
5.Tom Nguyen
6.Larry
7.Steve

Tuesday, April 10:
Film Festival/9 presentations (5 mins each)
                  1Jason Ho WILL GO NEXT DAY
                  2.Marzieh Allahyari
                  3.Lucia Bai
                  4. Daniel Lu
                  5.Jacky Sun
                  6.Rosa Hua
                  7.Zoey Huang
                  8.Joey Wang
                  9.James WILL GO NEXT DAY

Thursday, April 12:
       Film Festival/ 8 presentations (5 mins each)
                        James       
                               Jason Ho 
                           1. Charis Tang
                           2. David Niu
                           3.Cindy Mo
                           4.Roya Abdi
                           5.Danielle Choez
                           6.Mark Jinag
                           7. Christal Lyu
                           8.Mikhail Wang
                           9.Hawk Zhang

Film Fest Presentation order A block

Monday, April 9:
Film Festival/8 presentations (5 mins each)
 1.Sam McClellanAmy
                  2.Amy
  3.Alice Zeng
                  4.Ted Kim
                  5. Christine Jiang
                  6.Yui Ito
                  7.Kyra Shao
                  8.David He
TUESDAY, April 17:
Film Festival/   9 presentations (5 mins each)
1.Jason Yu
                  2.Alan Li
                  3.Yaelim Jung
                  4.Chaeyoon kim
                  5.Melody Hou
                  6.Jolin LiuGrace YU
                  7.Tina Vu
                  8.Kudzi Nehumba
                  9.Linda Xu
Friday, April 13:
          Film Festival/ 8 presentations (5 mins each)
1.Jingyi Dou
                  2.Hector Xu
                  3.Acton Chan
                  4.Felix Ng
                  5.Patrick Ou
                  6.Clemens Brezinka
                  7.Grace YU
                  8.Robbie,Feng

What assessments are coming up to year end and more study methods

Hello All, Below you will find the list of assessments. I am adding links here  to the tools for studying we have been reviewing. For ...